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Zack Isohar

Zack Isohar

Posts : 4
Ryo : 30
Join date : 2009-10-18

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PostSubject: Genome Clan   Genome Clan Icon_minitimeThu Oct 22, 2009 7:48 pm

Name of Clan: The Genomes.
Name of Kekkai Genkai or Ability: Dyne
Type: Innate Ability

General Ninja Type: Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu

History: The Genome clan was born on a long lost island, known only as Terra, unbalanced forces of power waged war on this land, soon turning it desolate. The Terrans were on the losing side, constantly ravaged by those only known as Gaians. These people had a far greater military force, and were constantly winning battles, defeating the Terrans at every turn. Things looked bleak for the Terrans, their King dead, only his second in command remained to fight a losing war, known as Gairlt, however, Gairlt had one last plan to overthrow the Gaians.

Gairlt had been experimenting on Terrans with high adaptability and physical prowess, using something new to the land that beings called “ninjas” had introduced, using the energy of Chakra. Using this strange force, he manipulated Terrans into beings like the ninja, able to “Ninjutsu” like techniques, he classed these techniques after a lost prophet with magical powers known as “Dyne”. The Terrans new abilities soon allowed them to gain ground against the Gaians, but it wasn’t enough. Gairlt went mad, creating the ultimate warrior, donning them “Genomes” the most powerful of these highly powered Terrans.

The Genomes power was beyond belief, they obliterated everything in their path, the Gaians had not yet learnt of Chakra, and as of such had no chance of fighting back, these new Genomes fought through the forces, but their power was too much, whatever ground they brought back to themselves was rendered useless due to the uncontrolled carnage they had released on their enemies. The main drawback of this power was a seriously reduced life span. Gairlt, almost losing all of his sanity, fixated on perfecting his creation, lost sight on what the original plan of overthrowing the Gaians was, and focused solely on creating the ultimate weapons.

Gairlt, near death, had only a few more subjects left, he released them against the dwindling Gaian empire, these were the perfect subjects he had been praying for. He ordered them to kill everything in their path and destroy the Gaians, but what he hadn’t accounted for would be his ultimate downfall. Inside these ultimate Genomes, rested the hearts and souls of the Terrans who had offered themselves up to Gairlt. Realising their power was only used to harm others, the Genomes turned on Gairlt, killed him, and left the dying land to leave to it’s natural cause, without their power disrupting and corrupting many.

They found their way to the land of the ninja, and found their powers weren’t far from the powers of other beings here. They felt at home and settled in various countries pertaining to their own interests. Some found interests in the weapons they used, and came to like various short swords, daggers, and weapons they created known as “Swallow Blades”.

These were weapons where two shorts or daggers joined at the handle would serve as a double weapon, they also designed various skills involving their Dyne abilities, making them even stronger, despite their strength in Dyne attacks, they couldn’t muster the ability to be able to use ordinary elemental jutsu techniques, and have never found out why. Their clan is still prosperous, and is still alive after a good 50 years.

Jutsu: Dyne Abilities:

Free Energy
Rank: B
Description: With each punch or slash, an explosion is created, with a different symbol each time. This technique does not cause the opponent to explode, but causes physical harm. The hits don’t have to connect, but it is a close range attack.

Tidal Flame:
Rank: C
Description: The user slams their fists into the ground. A ring of flame appears and homes in on the enemy, only executable on the ground.

Scoop Art:
Rank: B
Description: A purple beam of energy shoots from the sky, driving the enemy into the ground, causing pain from the beam and from the impact to the ground. Only useful on airbourne enemies.

Shift Break:
Rank: A
Description: The user makes a slight hop into the air, and four pillars of water form around the enemy. After a small delay, they crash into the opponent.

Stellar Circle 5
Rank: B
Description: After puffing out the chest, and spreading the users arm, a circle of energy engulfs the user, and rockets upwards. Useful at close range and at airbourne enemies only.

Meo Twister
Rank: B
Description: The user raises an arm, and multiple beams of energy form above the opponent, and shoot downwards. Each beam sends them backwards, into the next beam and so on. Maximum of four beams.

Solution 9
Rank: A
Description: The user thrusts both arms forward, and multiple explosions rush from the users hands, travelling in a straight line towards the enemy, rocketing them into the air and prone to many more strikes.

Grand Lethal
Rank: B
Description: The user dives at the enemy, twisting at great speeds. They are enveloped by purple light and home towards the enemy, driving into them and sending them into the air, prone to attacks.

Terran Destruction
Rank: S
Description: The ultimate Genome technique known so far. The user moves at high speeds, slashing the enemy multiple times, they then spin around the opponent, still slashing, creating a massive vortex of energy, at this point, the Genome speeds upwards and tears right through the opponent.

Air Pulse
Rank: D
Description: Allows a dash towards the enemy mid air, useble two times in a row.
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Sasru Uchiha

Sasru Uchiha

Posts : 96
Ryo : 373
Join date : 2009-09-07
Age : 26
Rank : Hokage (Admin)
Village : Konohagakure

Ninja Card
Health:
Genome Clan Left_bar_bleue2800/2800Genome Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (2800/2800)
Chakra:
Genome Clan Left_bar_bleue3250/3250Genome Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (3250/3250)
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PostSubject: Re: Genome Clan   Genome Clan Icon_minitimeFri Oct 23, 2009 1:04 am

I like the history of the clan but a couple of your techniques seem a little bit over the top fro my taste.
Free Energy, this one well symbols and explosions with the fists, i just think its a little bit over the top
Shift Break, same with this one
These i would not approve
but the rest is approved
(Ketsueki, if you think i have made a mistake, tell me plz)
I am a trainee mod, so you might want to wait for Ketsueki to finalize this.


Right Zack, Ketsueki has given me some advice
Now Shift Break It Says Four Coloums of water just appear, i find that to be impossible. So i suggest that the jutsu could only work when your target is on a open space of water eg. a lake. This will make a bit more sense and give your clan another jutsu.


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Zack Isohar

Zack Isohar

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Ryo : 30
Join date : 2009-10-18

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PostSubject: Re: Genome Clan   Genome Clan Icon_minitimeSat Oct 24, 2009 5:04 am

How about Water Vapor in the air?

It's not like they're big or anything :S

But you're the mod so ok.
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